My first pet (rewrite)
When I was eight, my parents gave me a wonderful present for my birthday. It was a lovely puppy. I had stuffed animals, especially doggies, and I played with them every day. Therefore, my parents realized that I wanted a pet dog as my friend. I remember that the puppy my parents gave me was so warm and was shivering a little. I was determined to take good care of the dog. Then, I named the dog luck after good luck.
My first pet (rewrite)
When I was eight, my parents gave me a wonderful present for my birthday. It was a lovely puppy. I had stuffed animals, especially doggies, and I played with them every day. Therefore, my parents realized that I wanted a pet dog as my friend. I r...